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09.11.09

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a flaming leaf twists up and up in a dance of smoke and ashes
this is for the saijiki contest over at ~the-haiku-club.

region: france
season: temperate - autumn
category: the season
kigo: autumn bonfire
description: the bonfire is suggestive of the onset of cold weather, and the close of summer through the burning of wood, leaves and human materials that are dried out / left over from the end of the season. in my haiku I've tried to give an impression of the link between the colours of the fire and the changing colours of the autumn leaves.

bonfires are also something I associate strongly with autumn/november at home in england, because of bonfire night. this wasn't the inspiration for this haiku, which is more of a daytime image, but shows another nice kigo link. :)
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Djoseph's avatar
Congrats on winning the competition! :winner:
Well deserved. I love this one.